Friday, October 9, 2015

Write Off! - #001 - EmotionPotion™

EmotionPotion
Evening Frank, can I get a bottle of Tranquil?”
Frank was the sidewalk vendor on the corner of Oak Lane and 34th street, just up the street from the entrance to Carver’s Park where Samuel spent every evening after work. He sold tiny bottles of EmotionPotion, bottled emotions ranging from Rage to Bliss and everything else in the emotional spectrum.
Looks like it’d be a beautiful sunset doesn’t it Sam?” Samuel disliked being called Sam, especially by Frank. He was in his thirties, Sam was far too casual, but for nearly twelve years he had never told Frank this fact. What did it matter?
I suppose the clouds would make the sunset seem more brilliant, but it doesn’t really affect us since we can’t even see the horizon past the cityscape.” He spoke matter of factly, as did most people not under the influence of the magical emotion elixir that Frank, as well as an army of similar peddlers and multinational corporations sold to the masses. Without it in their system people grew apathetic to a robotic degree.
We can still see the sky above us eh? And I bet it’ll glow with all the colors of the sun tonight.” Even Frank himself was under the influence of the popular vial of Optimism, it was great for his sales. “You know what Sam? You come here so much, you’ve earned yourself a free bottle.”
Samuel shook Franks hand and took the bottle with a quiet thanks. Gratitude was currently out of stock and he doubted he’d have bought it even if it wasn’t.
Heading down the sidewalk he was forced to step over the extended legs of a man passed out on the ground, an empty vial of Bliss in his hands, the reward for a long day of can collection. People literally were no longer able to afford pity as the big companies had started selling it exclusively to rich buyers with the promise part of the profit went to help whatever cause was popular.
In the park Samuel selected his usual bench, a small wooden affair on top of a grassy hill in nearly the dead center of the park. Carefully he removed the cork from the vial and downed the bittersweet liquid in one draft. Within seconds he let out a small sigh, a smile forming on his lips for the first time that day.
He sat like that for almost ten minutes, just watching the clouds racing overhead. For the first time all day he felt at ease in his own skin, satisfied that his life wasn’t meaningless. Someone had to punch in those numbers. Not everyone could have children or the whole planet would be swarmed with them. He was just a cog in the machine, but someone had to be his particular cog.

Life was pretty good. 

Monday, September 21, 2015

Write Off! #001 - Bottled Emotions Submission

So, I guess I need to write a submission for this! Here goes nothing!

Jack Burnside stood at the podium with the bright lights shining into his face. Hundreds of people sat in the seats in front of him and he did his best to stand up straight behind the small podium. Cameras flashed and people talked in the crowd. He was a six foot three, two hundred forty pound black graduate of Harvard Law who had been in politics for close to two decades now. He and his wife decided that this was the time to run for the highest office in the nation.

"It's not right!" he yelled into his microphone. "We can't let our youth continue on this dangerous path!" The Republican presidential candidate was red in the face showing his deep feelings for the major issue of the 2032 race. A large amount of people attending this particular debate cheered at Burnside's outburst. His opponent scoffed.

"Next you're going to say that we need to ban alcohol and marijuana," his opponent chimed.

The issue was of emotions, hand crafted in a factory in Wisconsin, distributed by Vitex, and sent to pharmacies across the nation. It's something that hadn't been considered a possibility just ten years prior, but massive steps toward understanding how the brain works and the chemicals responsible for emotion allowed Anger, Sadness, Happiness and so many more to be bottled and sold just like anything else- as long as you were 18 or older with a valid ID.

The opposing side believes that these emotions take away from us what makes us human- what Jack Burnside believes. They believe that they would destroy true human interaction and would change America into a nation full of drones and zombies.

The other side believes that they open up the human mind and destroy issues that have plagued humanity for ages. There have been preliminary studies that have showed that not only do the emotions stop you from feeling stress, but actually heal the parts of the body that have been affected by the negative emotions after prolonged use.

Nevertheless, there was a sharp, deep divide between the two sides of this particular coin.

"I am not saying that we are going to ban alcohol and marijuana, though I do not particularly like the use of them. What is the point of altering your brain just for a small amount of change?"

"It allows people to release their stresses for a while and have a clear mind for a little bit. These bottled emotions are even safer than those drugs. These things are chemicals that your brain makes naturally, unlike marijuana and alcohol."

"Why don't people deal with those stresses in a proactive way to allow them to heal and understand and learn?" He gripped both sides of the small, blue podium he stood behind.

"Are you saying that those who were in war and suffer from severe post-traumatic stress disorder should simply go to a therapist, not use medication to help them sleep at night... They should just deal with the stress, right?" The crowd began to murmur.

"There are good uses for certain medications that--"

"Why not allow them to take a glass of DeStress and let them sleep like they only had ten years before?"

"I'm not saying that at all. I just--"

"We need to allow people to feel the way they want to. We need people to heal and get better. My opponent doesn't want people to heal- he wants them to hurt. These emotions allow us to feel how we want to feel. No more depression, no more anxiety- two of the biggest causes of mental anguish and teenage suicides in the world. These allow them to get rid of those feelings and spend the time instead finding a solution to their problems." The minority few in the back of the auditorium intermittently clapped.

"Then what is the point of having emotions, huh?" Jack was getting frustrated that he wasn't given the chance to expand upon the points he was trying to make. His opponent was known to interrupt and twist words to fit his ideas and win arguments. "What's the point? We lose what makes up human if we can't get mad when someone is treated badly, we can't get sad when our dog dies. We can just take some drug and it'll all go away. We lose the ability to mourn, to feel, to understand others. We destroy the connection we have made over the centuries as a human race."

"It's such a flawed--"

"It is flawed. It absolutely is flawed. People die because their emotions get the better of them. But people also flourish and create and change the world for the better because of emotions. They create art, music, films. We connect to these fictional characters in books not because they're always happy, but because sometimes they're sad at the same time we are. Sometimes they cheer us up or make up forget our problems for a little bit.

"It's what allows this to happen," He waved his hand out across the audience. " It's what allows me to get angry at my opponent and forces me to find a solution to the problem and a compromise that will benefit us both. It's what allows him to get angry back and fight for his own ideas. Emotions are what makes us different from the person next to us. It's what causes wars and murders, but it's also causes good samaritans and peace."

The crowd erupted in applause, even those in the back clapped with Jack. His opponent stood there fuming, only proving the point Jack just made. The debate was most certainly over, but Jack still felt a strong surge of guilt deep within him as he walked back to his changing room. Even with the three bottles of Clear Thought he took just an hour before the debate began, his emotions had caused him to explode on that stage and show the world, even if they did not know, that he was a hypocrite.

The last of the emotion wore off and he was left back at his flat a depressed alcoholic like he had been for years. Sure the papers and his speeches spoke of his rehabilitation over the past three years, but the truth was Vitex came to help him. He didn't know how he would make it through the rest of the campaign without it, but no matter what he did or didn't do, he couldn't give up. He grabbed another bottle from his kitchen shelf and downed it before going to bed.

Tuesday, August 25, 2015

Chris D'Lacey - The Fire Within - Review By Tim

Chris D'Lacey – The Fire Within

The Fire Within follows college freshman David Rain into the eccentric Pennykettle household when he becomes their tenet. Liz Pennykettle is a locally renown sculptor, creating clay dragons so artfully crafted, it would be hard to believe they weren't real. Upon moving in Liz gifts David with his very own dragon, a storytelling dragon. With the inspiration of his dragon, David begins to write a short story about a one-eyed squirrel who is the passion of Liz's daughter Lucy and in the process finds his stories uncover more than he could have imagined.

On a whim and between books I picked up this book from my shelves. A book bought, largely on a whim because it dealt with dragons, from my middle school Scholastic Book Fair. I remembered that I had absolutely loved the book then, but that was about all I could really remember about the book.

I got quite a kick out of the large print and small chapters (we're talking roughly 200 words per page, eight pages per chapter). I admit I was slightly worried that this old favorite of mine would not hold up to the test of time and I would find it excessively childish or boring.

A decade later, as a college kid myself, I still found myself cheering for the characters, swooning for the lovely Sophie and even getting misty eyed towards the end. I was honestly amazed how entranced I became with such a simple and elegant plot line.

As the first part of a series, expect further reviews from this author. (Truth be told, I've already read and finished the second book).

As for my recommendation – If you like dragons, squirrels, and the creative pursuits (sculpting, writing, storytelling) then read it!

Wishing I had a Gadzooks to help me write better,
~Timothy Reid


Monday, August 17, 2015

Stephen King - On Writing: A Memoir of the Craft - Review By Tim

Stephen King's On Writing: A Memoir of the Craft (2000)

              Before we start this review I have a dirty little secret:
              This is the first thing by Stephen King I have ever read. I'm just not one for suspense/horror. Not my tastes. But for a college class (Historical Writing, interestingly enough) my teacher assigned this book and I was blown away with this man's talent. (Only a surprise to me at this point, I know, I'm behind.) I've already went out and bought a couple books by him (Under the Dome, The Stand, Salem's Lot) and look forward to reading them.

             Okay, secrets out of the way, lets crack on with this review.
This book can essentially be broken down into two parts. The first part is more of a straight memoir, telling the story of how King came to be a literary legend. Pulling no punches, King starts with the innocent enough horror/thriller movie loving childhood on to the more gritty parts of his life dealing with his addiction issues, and at the end of the book, his near death experience with a blue van driven by a man with a dog named Bullet.
             The second part of this book harkens back to King's education days. King takes the position of the hard-ass but inspiring teacher to any inspiring author. “If you're a bad writer, no one can help you become a good one, or even a competent one.” “I'll be as encouraging as possible, because it's my nature and because I love this job. I want you to love it, too. But if you don't want to work your ass off, you have no business trying to write well.”
Technical aspects aside, such as the murder of adverbs or Strunk and White's Rule 17 (Omit Needless Words!), King's advice boils down to two simple concepts. Read and write compulsively. Work hard, but do it because you love it. Beautiful in its simplicity.

Overall, this book was just a lot of fun to read and as an inspiring author myself the book was filled with many little insights into the writing craft which I could eagerly connect with. Two of my favorite quotes from the book (there were actually quite a few, King is filled with soundbites, but I narrowed it down): “Even after a thousand pages we don't want to leave the world the writer has made for us, or the make-believe people who live there.” & “Stories are relics, part of an undiscovered pre-existing world. The writer's job is to use the tools in her or her toolbox to get as much of each one out of the ground intact as possible.”  

[My next review, on King's Salem's Lot will be coming out shortly. Look forward to it!]
~Timothy Reid

Friday, August 14, 2015

Write Off! - #001 - Bottled Emotion - Sept. 2015

The first of the monthly writing prompts comes courtesy of the subreddit r/writingprompts [LINK] Once you have created your own short story, you should go check out some of the redditers submissions in the link. They're quite good.

'You live in a world where you can buy bottled emotions.'

Due Date: By the End of September 2015

Submissions: 

Chapter One of Chapter One

Simone needs to work on this one.

I'll tell you the rules - Write Off!

Sorry, pun intended. Ha.

Write Off! is going to be a monthly writing prompt chosen by a different writer of this blog each time.

Each writer will get to choose the prompt as well as the level of challenge. Some challenges could include word count, POV, style, etc.

Everyone has one month from the initial prompt to write a short story. These stories will be posted on the main page of the blog and linked in the original prompt's post.

People outside of this blog are more than welcome to join in on the fun and write their own stories which could be posted onto this blog as well.

Really, there's not much more to say as it's pretty self-explanatory.

Keep Writing,
Timothy Reid

PostScript - It's a monthly 'challenge' but honestly anyone can submit at any time. These are not strict rules, it's meant to be just fun.

Blog Introductions~ The First Post

Why do we write? 

I've seen countless authors approach this question with essentially the exact same response; We write because we need to. It is a compulsion.

But as four kids, just starting out in the real world of full time jobs, serious college training, and marriage, finding the time or drive to write becomes much harder. 

So the purpose of this blog is to build a creative space for a group of friends to help make time for the creative endevours which even in 'adulthood' still remain a quiet compulsion in the back of our minds. 

The blog itself will be a collection of many different creative enterprises. Organized in the bar located beneath the blogs title '| Written Between Lines |' are links to these various projects. Each project's main page will contain a directory of links to the various pages associated with the project. Please feel free to explore these in your free time!

As a brief rundown of what projects are currently being worked on (though may not be currently online at the moment) here is a list and description of each project:

  • Write Off! 
    • Twice a month (probably) a creative writing prompt will be posted. This project will serve occasionally as a competition, but ultimately is about keeping the creative mind 'fresh' and allowing authors to share and grow more confident in their writing styles. 
  • The First Chapter
    • This is Simone's project so I'm really not sure what exactly this will be. Simone, you will be made an admin (naturally) so please change this once you've got stuff sorted.
  • Tim's Random Reveiws
    • Exactly what you'd expect, I will be reviewing various books. While popular books should likely make it into the mix, many of the books will be ones which you might not have heard of otherwise. For example English translations of Japanese 'Light Novels' [novellas] or self published ebooks which are currently flooding the internet. While currently labeled as just my reviews, that may change if others wish to post their own reviews. 
  • Miscellaneous
    • I don't even know eactly what will be going here, but that's why it's miscellaneous right?
  • Tim and Sam's Story
    • While not currently online, this is a project which Sam and I will be working on. I will write it, with the creative imput of my soon to be wife, while she will draw images to match. Please look forward to it!
  • Jonathan's Story
    • Jonnyboy, I figured you might want to do something a little more long term as well so I'm putting this up. As you'll be an admin, please fill this space in or delete as you decide.
For more information, or to get started reading please visit the respective Projects, linked above. 

And as a final note, while for the foreseeable future it'll just be the four of us, this blog will be an open place for anyone who wants to exercise their creativity, especially with the Write Off! Project.

Keep Reading, 
Timothy Reid